EXCERPTS
Synopsis (back cover) and Excerpts from Night School.
Synopsis
Mr. Ben Sanders has gone missing and his infatuated student Brenda is determined to find him. She and Ben’s friend Tim are concerned his disappearance has something to do with the screams that came from a house on Denison Street and the mutilated bodies that are popping up all over town.
Things are about to become more complex in Brenda’s life. She uses the “skills” she has learned from being the community Peeping Tom to play detective and piece together clues to hopefully create a map to Ben’s location.
During the search for Ben, Brenda & Tim come face to face with seedy characters wandering the streets at night; drugs dealers, prostitutes and oh yes, all those dead bodies.
Who is this maniac running loose on the streets at night? Why does he do it? What does he want?
Brenda and Tim will find out soon enough.
Excerpts (scroll to the bottom to hear an additional excerpt)
Ben looked up at the clock on the wall and saw what time it was. 2:50.
Only ten more minutes to go and I am outta this place, Ben said to himself as he closed the textbook he was teaching out of.
Even though it was only Monday, Ben felt as if it was a whole week of school coming to an end.
He looked up from the closed textbook and scanned the classroom.
He saw some of the students chatting quietly, some studying the minute hand on the clock, while others passed notes between one another. Ben couldn’t care less of them passing notes during class, as long as it was done quietly and didn’t disturb anyone else.
He looked up at the clock again. 2:55.
Only five more minutes now and I can go home, run, eat and relax.
Ben heard a crackle above his head. It sounded like wax paper being crunched together into a ball. Tilting his head up and back, he realized it was the speaker that the morning announcements were normally done through. Tilting his head down and forward, he saw the students also heard the noise and were interested in what the announcement may be.
Could be about the upcoming Friday night football game, which just so happened to be homecoming as well, Ben thought to himself, as the principle’s voice came through in a booming fashion.
“Attention students…..this is Principle Walters speaking…”
Yeah, no shit, we know who you are, ran through Ben’s mind as the announcement continued.
Ben never did like the Principle at Mid-Day High School. He always seemed like a pompous asshole that thought he was better than everyone else just because he was the Principle and made important decisions. Sometimes he made the large decisions without even conferring with the school board. It had gotten him into trouble before, but he never lost his job.
Ben remembered one time in particular.
The school parking lot needed to be redone with black-top a few summers ago. There was one teacher that did this type of work on the side during summer vacations, but there was a policy of hiring teachers to do such work for the school. The principle didn’t even take bids from other companies that specialized in such work. Instead he gave the job to the teacher and made it look like he hired an outside company by fudging work orders and invoices. Eventually, news got out who was doing the work when one of the school board members drove by the school and noticed who was spreading the stone and black sludge across the parking lot. The school board member had gotten out of his car, walked up to Mr. Jones and asked what was going on.
“Just doing some side work,” replied Mr. Jones.
“Who gave you such authority,” had said the school board member.
“Principle Walters gave me orders to redo the black top of the school parking lot, along with the small parking area by the football stadium.”
“How are you getting paid for this,” asked the board member.
“John gave me half of the payment upfront while the other half I am going to receive after I finish the job”
“What sort of check was this?”
“A check, you know, paper, my name on it, signed by John.”
“Don’t be a smartass, Pete, was it a check from Mid-Day,” asked the board member.
“Yes.”
The school board member proceeded to turn around and make his way back to his car. On the way over to his black Cadillac, he pulled a cell phone from his trousers, punched in some numbers and raised the small unit to his right ear.
From what Pete had told Ben of the incident, he stopped working and a while later Principle Walters had pulled up in his car and began talking to the board member.
Pete said that there had been some yelling and finger pointing and he was told to go home. In the end, the Principle was never held accountable for his actions and the city department finished off the parking lot.
The Principle continued with the announcement. Ben had missed the beginning.
“…according to the police department, Miss. Peterson was found at her west side apartment…funeral services have yet to be planned…we will keep you informed”
The speaker on the wall crackled a few more times and went silent. A moment later the voice returned.
“As a reminder, there are school counselors available if you need them in the guidance office…thank you.”
The announcement ended and Ben peered out over his students.
Did I just hear that right? Something about Miss. Peterson and funeral services? Maybe it wasn’t about her but about her mother or something.
Ben had known from rumors among the school staff that her mother had been dying of cancer. Maybe that was what happened. Her mother passed away and she was found in Miss. Peterson’s apartment. But that didn’t make much sense to Ben. He realized that the Principle wouldn’t have announced that Miss. Peterson’s mother had died. It had to be her that died. But when did it happen, what did she die of? I just saw her on Saturday at the faculty party. Were the thoughts going through Ben’s head as the final bell rang.
Students got up from their desks and proceeded to hurry out of the classroom.
Ben followed them out the door, walked down the hall and opened the door to the school office.
Blog Talk Radio Program (listen to a 12 minute excerpt of Night School)
June 14, 2009 at 9:44 pm
Such intrigue and suspense. Keep up the good work.
April 15, 2009 at 8:18 am
Now I have to buy the book to see how this all turns out… you tease, you! Seriously, though, I really like it. Hope you sell tons of copies.
February 3, 2009 at 2:30 pm
Ty,
Nice website. Really professional looking. I wish you good fortune with your book. I’m not a horror reader myself (except the business pages lately), but I know a couple people who are and I’ll let them know about you.
I liked the line, “Uhhh…sir…you are sorta creeping me out here”
January 21, 2009 at 9:34 pm
I can’t wait to read your book. It looks like it will be a best seller. Good luck.
Ruth
Author of Inherited Blood
December 21, 2008 at 1:48 am
Hey Ty,
I stumbled across your website and read the excerpt to your new novel. As a horror/fantasy/paranormal writer myself, I was very impressed with your work. I could visually see the scene as it unfolded. Kudos!
Anyway, good luck and I look forward to reading your future work.
All the best,
Mackenzie
December 13, 2008 at 10:43 am
Ty,
I spotted on the publisher’s message boards that you’d posted an excerpt. Today, i finally go the time to check it out. I intended to just scan through, but it pulled me in and really held my attention. It was funny and scary all at the same time. One second i was laughing, the next i was sitting her edging myself forward in my chair to find out what happens next. You have a real talent for writing and i really enjoyed reading this excerpts.
Best wishes! I know you’re going to be a major sucess!
Terra Ann Pitre
Isla’s Redemption
http://terraannpitre.webs.com/
December 12, 2008 at 2:54 pm
Read your excerpt, it was certainly entertaining and held my attention. From the excerpt I would have to say this is a book I will have to purchase. If you have followed any of my posts you already know I am a huge Horror Fiction fan. Best wishes I hope you selll a million.
A.W. Nutter
DADDY’S GAME
SHIMMER
http://www.freewebs.com/abcedit
December 12, 2008 at 1:24 pm
Thanks for the response. It’s fun to have a dialog back and forth about these things.
It’s all good!
Hope you still check out the book!
-Ty
December 12, 2008 at 1:20 pm
Hehehe — not only am I spell checker challenged, I’m webpage poor. I know nothing about setting up sites on line. I couldn’t even figure out MySpace. *hangs head in shame*
And I guess the italics thing is preference. To me, it always comes across like the author is talking down to the reader if they think they have to highlight sound cues.
(Now I feel special – you made the paragraph all shiny for me… I’ll refrain from calling it “pretty” out of respect for it being “horror”
)
Anywho… good luck with the book.
December 12, 2008 at 1:04 pm
I’m in agreement with you on one point, via the following quote given to me by a multi NYT best seller and USA today top 10 author.
“A working rule of thumb is not to use the same word twice in a sentence or paragraph”
So, I will give you credit on the use of the words ‘dark room’ two times in the first paragraph (which have now been corrected, btw – just for you). As for using the words ‘dark room’ in the second paragraph, there is absolutely nothing wrong with that. Also, there is nothing wrong with italicizing a sound word.
Also…perhaps YOU need an editor as well for spelling ‘italicizing’ and ‘amateurish’ incorrectly!
But, really…thanks for the feedback.
-Ty
btw – what’s your website? would love to take a look at your work, as well.
December 12, 2008 at 12:39 pm
You really need a professional editor. Three “dark room”s by the beginning of the second paragraph are the kinds of things a real editor would help you fix. Just like they’d keep you from itallicizing every sound cue… it’s ameturish.
November 25, 2008 at 8:21 pm
Ty: Congradulations on your new book. Read excerpts of the book, good reading.
don & darlene
October 4, 2008 at 11:38 pm
Thanks, Stacy. Check back often for news and updates!
October 3, 2008 at 8:24 pm
Ty,
I just followed your link from Beck’s blog. I am new to his blog this year and had no idea that you were an author. I am a huge horror fan, and just think that this book sounds excellent! Good luck with it and I’ll be watching for its release! GO TIGERS 2009!!!!
-Stacy